I've finally finished reading Paradise Lost and my first draft that's around 1500 words. It's a bit all over the place so I'm not sure how to approach it. There is lots of stuff where I could dig deeper and deeper, but I've already spent quite some time on it.
Has the author of Paradise Lost made anything else? I know I say this all the time but here even more than before, I feel like the whole fic is filled with double meanings. Maybe I just need to take a break and get a good night of sleep.
As for the fetish stuff, I feel like it's showed in a way that's almost evil. Everything is right at the end in a big paragraph, and after going through it I almost feel soiled. I've read/watched/seen deranged stuff, but this is the first things that leaves me this disturbed. What I've just said probably sound ridiculous/insane, but on the other hand the author wrote a fic about eating human waste and called it "Paradise Lost".
I think I'll prioritize reviews of more gentle stuff for a while.
>>30363193"blind" here meant "without any instructions from the authors/requesters".
I do review the stories as they go/ the first two were written by reading the fic and writng anything I found interesting/valuable. The third one has an edit pass. I'm still working on the fourth one, it might be the first having a proper structure.
>>30363938See explanation above. I think calling it "reacting" is fair for the stuff that isn't edited, but videos have temporal constraints that text doesn't have. If I want to spend half of the review talking about one word I can.
I don't review the fic after having read it as in "read it, and then write stuff" because I won't remember everything if I don't write it down. I also don't have any experience in that kind of stuff, so I think getting stuff out to get some experience and a feel for the work is important. But as I've said numerous time, I welcome any feedback, suggestions, techniques. Now that I think about it, it might be a good idea to find stuff that explains how to write a review. I guess I expected a bit more feedback to guide me.
>>30363873I asked a question today, and got a quick answer and a long one. That's my only experience there.
