>>33479985I was watching them for a bit, and while its okay she really needs to make them more professional. These feel like random stream clips rather than a short video essay.
She needs to fix her stuttering and make things look clean and well professional looking. Have the video edited in the background and provide narrative over it rather than trying to do it both at the same time.
It really shows that she's a streamer and not a content creator with how amateur it looks and feels, and not in a good way.
Hopefully she improves it, does she have marshmallows or something I can send advice on? Would love to see her improve.