>>34404271I think the lyrics in Non-fiction were pretty witty. I particularly enjoy of her use of dramatic pause and changes on intonation to deliver a point. In the song alone there's Gura and Kiara's lines:
>Though fractured deeply, worn by sorrows from time and time again>Take my hand and enter our… “pretend.”and
>When forces say “behave”>We say instead,>“Be brave.”And her other songs such as Cursed Night rhyming complicated with complicated to signify the difficulty of explaining a complex predicament by simply reiterating the word after a pause. Understandably, ESLs might not be able to pick up it's meaning. But for wagies like me, this is my favorite line from EoAL:
>Thinks an office is a coffin>Until off is where you're laidGod. I feel this so much. Get me out of this brick wall.
However, some criticism is valid. Some verses are kinda wordy. 
