>>3619793your proportions are wrong, the stomach is too short and so is the tail, the collarbone is too big and also in the wrong location for where the way the body is positioned, the tits are also places in the wrong place but at least you got the face right.
before you draw try to find good reference pictures, it'll help you get things like the position of body parts and their proportions correct.
the coloring is okay, the shading needs work..
