>>39849614>It's more or less the hardest spanking she's ever had, but she's not lost her composure or cried even a little? Not sure why she's proud of not crying either, it's a punishment, it would be okay to cry.It's a matter of personal preference of course, but I don't like crying girls during BDSM sessions - to me it's obnoxious-sounding, and makes them look ugly and too pitiable at the same time. Hence the bit about her (You) not liking when she cries or screams, and her screaming only towards the very end because she's a tough oni. Ultimately it's another obedience test for her that's part of the established power dynamic, a challenge for her to overcome for your sake. That's where the pride in her endurance comes from, and her being happy about not crying.
It's true that she could have lost her composure more towards the end, beyond the screaming and tensing up. I guess I wanted her to be (mostly) successful instead of having more annoyance by her trying to resist, crying or talking (again). More description or a comparison to previous, lighter, spankings could have worked well, maybe.
>Also it would be really hard to resist taking her from behind while her butt still hurts, since a new influx of pain every time she's being rammed would drive her maso head nuts.That's something I could have brought up earlier in the story as well, the temptation and resisting it. That a huge part of being a dom is showing restraint and doing what's best for oneself and one's partner is an important part of BDSM for me; with great power comes great responsibility. In this case keeping Ayame edged but unsatisfied is the most effective torture method, getting her to beg for sex is very humiliating (hence mutually enjoyable), and this way the sex to conclude the day will be the best it can be.
I'm biased because the torture and domination is at least as important as the sex to me, but I enjoy mastering your own desires as well as your partner in this way. And I hate misrepresentative stories where being a dom means that you can just do whatever you want without consequences (à la 50 Shades of Rape). That's not how BDSM works.
>I like her lifting her butt up higher to indicate being obedient and "being hit on both left cheeks" when she speaks up, which as I understand is a slap in the face simultaneously with a slap on the ass.Yeah, that's the intended meaning. I don't think I could write anything significant without a decent amount of wordplay.
>>39847988I'm a bit too much of a sucker for references like that (hence the title being as it is as well), but it's nice to see them recognized.
