>>40129511>>40129810>>40131303>Plastic Littlethis has all the ingredients I love in NTR/NTS the teasing, the loving girlfriend who strokes you off while she tells you about her experience, and the "I love you" from her at the end MMPH! Good shit! I'm a sucker for the gf/wife doing it because she knows you're into it, her liking sex is just an added bonus. now here's the downside. it's way too short, it begs for a sequel that makes this a little longer.
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>Dusk That Follows An Autumn DayThis fic had a pretty nice length and plenty of sex scenes. Sadly, however, this one hits a few sour notes for me. For one I'm not crazy about blacked, it just does nothing for me, and as opposed to the first fic, this one rubbed me the wrong way, Fubuki bribing you more or less so she can continue to fuck black cock left and right. I fully expected Fubuki to leave you to continue fucking black dudes or her getting pregnant with a black guy's kid. both of which are turn-offs, but I was pleasantly surprised to see that it didn't go that route. she fulfilled her promise to both stop, and let you have sex with one of her friends. All and all, not a bad fic, and I'm sure that it tickled someone's fancy, just not mine.
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>Odysseuslike Dusk, this had some elements I liked and some I didn't. Both being made by the same guy, I knew there would be a bit of an overlap of a few elements, The writer clearly knows what he likes and even though it wasn't what I liked, I had to keep reading since it seemed to be what the writer was passionate about. This time around it focussed more on the heartbreak of seeing your wife NTR you. I liked the protagonist of dusk a little better, questioning why he liked seeing Fubuki cuck him while drowning in his lust and seeing her succumb to cock. The ending to this one was a tad predictable once I figured out the setting but it wasn't a bad thing. I would have liked a scene or two where Fubuki expresses how much she hates the other guys, or if the guys talked dirty to her would have been nice. once again not a bad fic, just missed a few key notes that would have made it better.
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>the three fics as a wholeI couldn't jack off to any of them, but plastic would have been the one had it been much longer. despite that, all three were fairly entertaining to read, but I'm a little disappointed that I'm left soft on 3 pretty good ntr fics. Maybe one day my dream ntr fic will come to fruition, that said the Lui dommie NTS fic is still something I'm patiently waiting for.
