>>41826198>On -month- -year- she began to breed beetles, having hundred of eggs and a dozen bugs. Her second twitter is pretty much beatle ranchOr
>On [month/year] she started keeping, breeding, and raising real live beetles, I'm not so sure on the accuracy of the "having hundreds of eggs and a dozen bugs." part. A more realistic number should be written. If we don't have an exact count we can still get close.
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>She has a second twitter profile to post all her photos and updates of her beetle collection.I don't remember if she opened her second twitter for the beetles or if it was to talk to fans and post random stuff she wanted, and then her beetle hobby happened so she decided that was the perfect venue for beetle posting, but either way I personally think it's better to be specific on what kind of stuff she posts on that account besides just "beetle ranch."
I also think we should leave out any mention of her brother using her dead beetles for taxidermy since that distracts from nenechi.
>In handcam streams she boldly showed her bare wrists with silly messages to viewers written on her skin.>Teamed up with Pekora in a Geoguesser v/s match against NoeSuba. She was the best playerI don't know what you mean by her being the best player but I revised the grammar in this nonetheless.
All these require more proofreading and factchecking before being added.
