>>42049625>>42049702>>42049799>>42053198>>42055666>>42057480>>42066825these are all fucking terrible, not just because of how the uncanny voices don't quite sound right but also because they're so out of character. None of the girls talk like in these so it instantly destroys the immersion, none of the real girls are as vulgar or crude as what is written here and the lack of hesitation/ awkwardness makes it instantly unbelievable. The girls also don't even sound turned on themselves in these clips, which makes it worse.
You can also just tell that these have been written by men, actual real women wouldn't talk like this and even when you watch (unscripted) porn, the way women dirty talk and how they think to try to turn men on is different to how men write women dirty talking. Whenever men try to write women being sexy it's always too upfront, over-the-top and confident/aggressively blunt in a way that real women never are. There are subtleties not present here which completely ruin it.
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>>42063300 said, the only accurate one I've heard is the vesper one and that's because he's male and he already acts unhinged/meme-y like this anyway so it's not too out of character; plus the bizarreness of the situation works because it's just comedic whereas writing 'Ame with horse' or whatever is so out there that you'd have to work really really hard to sell it as convincing and an actual turn-on where you'd take it seriously.
These edits just aren't cutting it and prove once again that coomers have absolutely no standards whatsoever.
