>>599543hey, i tuned in for 30 minutes. here is some candid feedback
you have potential! but there are some core aspects you need to work on
the biggest ones namely are that you need to work on your speech and voice, and you also need to be showing off your personality a little more.
the section of the stream i watched was mainly you doing stuff in-game and pretty much just saying outright what you were currently doing; if you gave more commentary on your thoughts and talked about more things, that would be a great start (no one actually tunes in for the game itself).
listening to you was also grating at times; speaking with more confidence and speaking from your diaphragm and not your throat will help you a lot. vary your speech patterns a little more to make your voice a little more easier to focus on for long periods of time.
a lot of things need refinement (your model tracking, the inconsistency of your overlay, posting timezones with your stream times). this is just something you will need to put more time and focus on.
like other anons said, you may benefit more from streaming with a png avatar first if you really are streaming from a surface. the surface is actually pretty capable (i know this because it was my primary computer through college), but it would benefit you to squeeze as much performance as you can out of the device while you get your bearings on streaming essentials. don't listen to the faggots telling you to get new equipment, that will not make you a better streamer.
i wish you success, you're already better than 100% of vtwitters since you've actually streamed once
