>>99033377imho, it would probably benefit from going reactor purge leads to something blowing up > station gets ran over while exploding > travel to Anisadora moved to the finale, where it ends in an intense but shot gunfight with Marlowe over the ship, which you use to link up with the Torrens and gtfo
skip two fairly unnecessary double-back sequences, get to optionally save Taylor as a small feel good reward, then yhe ending stinger is a reveal of an egg being stowed on Anisadora by one of Marlowe's profit focused crewmates (so you don't need the implied impregnation on Amanda as sequel hook)
