>>1877451>>1877451I'm not the anon who usually gives feedback, but i'll give it a shot.
As another anon pointed out, you should really increase the brightness for this, first of all.
As for criticism, it's hard to say without the original image. If you could provide it that would help.
Overall it's a nice job. The hair, especially to the right of the headphones, is sloppy. Always think of a direction you want to flow in- and try to avoid making the strands look too fat. You don't really want strands of hair/bangs to be traingles, they should almost always be curved and "flowing" somewhere. This takes some practice to get down. Take you time here, as bad hair can really throw off an otherwise good image.
You have some areas where you look like you have layers overlayed incorrectly. I circled these in red.
Some places looks like you used too many anchor points, making it look wobbly, or very sharp edges. I have those in green.
The feathers don't look very "feathery". Try to get a more precise shape on them rather than just blobs. You can get a bit creative here, or be very precise in how you vector them.
Might I add, the hand outstretched is very well done IMO. I always find them tricky but you did a good job with it.
Overall it's a good piece. Some parts are just a little rushed. Good work.
