>>1461419General fixes to show some issues - too many for ther comment field otherwise. I pointed out the worst offenders.
* Guitar tip - You have a somewhat-smooth, rough, and blockish line for what ALL should be smooth. Thicknesses are all inconsistent. You'll also notice that,your string keys should also be uniform, but aren't
* Guitar neck, top circle - same thing, but see how you have the curves for each? inside one is smooth and nice, then the rest looks like you just said "fuck it" and sketched them with a pencil. one isn't a smooth line - it's a corner, which you wouldn't find on a guitar like this.
* lower guitar, near her dress - the pt that looks like a wang bulge/codpiece - THOSE TYPES OF LINES ARE FUCKING STUPID. There. I said it. putting in a flair like this (especially in the original work) IS A SIGN OF THE ARTIST FIXING A LINE. If anything, it should be a consistent line representative of the internal line.
the Dress - Smooths and sharps like this don't do anything but jar the eye. smooth and flowing for clothing, unless it is an overlap or pleat corner.
her scarf - I don't know HOW you did it, buit you managed to make three consistent corners on each end look like six completely unique corners...
Her hand, large circle - The gap between hand and guitar neck really should be a different, darker color to emphasize that it is shadow within a shadow...
Shoulder circle near badge - These "flairs" should go to hell, as well as the above ranted issue - CLOTHING DOES NOT BEHAVE LIKE THIS!!! If anything, a soft taper or the usual two-pointed line should be used. I'm forgiving the top part of the shoulder seam, because on a real dress, it WOULD look similar, BUT THIS IS THE ONLY EXCEPTION in what you have done.
The bow - Just. No. Consistent all the way through for thickness would give it better balance. the way it is now, it looks like someone just said "Eh. I'll possibly pencil in a tie here to be cute" and then forgot about it.
