>>1665943You're lacking a lot of detail, especially in the hair. Highlights add a lot to hair, and not having them in the image can make it very dull. The color choices need to also be edited. It is too difficult to see the shadows as they are too close to the base hair color. I also feel the base hair color is a little too bright.
The face could also use some work. The skin tone is a little too bright and could use a better skin tone. I would also redo that blush and make it wider to have the gradient extend out farther so its not so jarring. I would also add in the blush lines from the original.
As for the body, I don't really know the proper coloring of the suit, so I can't comment on that. However, the highlights are lacking and could really add a lot, in my opinion.
One more thing. Edit the eye so it is angled to the side and downward, so it looks like its looking at the Metroid instead of us. I'll post an image for that to give you an idea...
Sorry if I sound like a dick pointing out all these issues. I don't mean to.
>>1666019Much more vibrant. I knew something was amiss when you were posting the previous WIP images.