>>1654263The colors of your lines are sort of inconsistent; some skin lines are greyish, some are black. It makes the colors look washed out due to her jaw, along with her eyes.
Red: pointy corners that shouldn't be pointy. I think there's also a couple of others that I missed; just look around for them. If it isn't a line fading to nothing, it probably shouldn't be pointy.
Orange: Major disconnect in line thickness between her midriff and arm.
Green: Line thickness difference on the same line; there's a couple of these and I only marked one, but that should be illustrative of what to look for.
Purple: Looks like the black part of her glove got stuck into the wrong layer.
A good first attempt, just needs touching up.
