Pic related is a discontinued WIP. The middle quadrant was going to be animated and the middle box (the empty one) was going to contain a clock.
>>1868395Bring the icons up so they're more even spaced between the bottom of the screen and the central box. Consider moving the box a little to ensure the icons are perfectly centered vertically cause if they're not it triggers my autism and hopefully triggers yours.
>>1868398Consider changing the green icons. Pretty old school design though, if the icons were centered vertically I'd like it.
>>1868620Avoid #000 or anything too close to it. Your wallpaper is too aliased, even if it's the 'style' it looks bad. Feel free to use reddit, elitism is dumb.
>>1868631It's alright but the pole is drawn in a noticeably different style to the girl (panty or stocking I can't remember), if you were a better artist you could do better shading and it'd look great :^). It's creative and christmassy, I'll give you that.
>>1868754Pretty standard fare. Consider adding 1px drop shadows to the shapes to smooth the transition between them.
>>1868789Looks alright, try removing the shadow at the bottom if you can. The font in the music widget is different to the clock font and that triggers my autism.
>>1868802Don't use #000 icons with that colour scheme. The transition from icon banner to music banner is very harsh. The widget and clock are also too #000. The art in the background is artifacted and poor quality. Also consider the 1px drop shadow, the fact the shapes overlap may make it not work though.
>>1868887Icons aren't centered horizontally or vertically.
>>1868995There's plenty of negative space there for you to fill with icons, as long as your colour them appropriately. The widget looks pretty bad. The font colours are too saturated, the font choice is poor, and the placement within the circle is off-center, it also clashes with the wallpaper. Also, remove the watermark at the bottom.
