>>1360131Much better! Though, the lowest bangs are still un-blended. Also, it looks a bit odd to have all the lines be black and then the main ones for the hair be brownish-red. There were a few spots I circled on the shirt/ends of the hair that seemed like they didn't connect solidly with the rest of it, also. Mostly I just circled what didn't look right---but that might be b/c it's not a higher res... If something circled doesn't make sense, let me know and I'll try to explain it better...
Hope the new image helps, though!
