>>1445814i'd circle everything in the hair, but i don't want to be a complete asshole. kudos for the work on the chain and having no gaps i could spot in your fills.
however, im not sure why you chose to go with a black outline on the hair.. the outlines dont match the original, and dont make a lot of sense in most places. you completely missed the right side of the bangs in two places. i'd also suggest you remove stroke entirely within the hair area (ends and on the outlines at least). the fine line details/highlights withthin the hair are way to thick compared to the original.
theres also a bit splot of blood missing on the neck. also, please round the nodes in your shadows and try using blur within the eyes.
