>>1451441I agree with the circle bits and if people can not take criticizing then they have no point in doing art I actually hate it when all I get are people saying its a great piece and don't point out issues. Thats one great thing about this thread since most people here can notice tiny things that don't stand out to me after staring at the same image for 20+ hours.
For the circled part of her bangs it would be best if you did the lines as one line and then cut out the parts for the hair clip, that way it looks like its one piece rather then 3 different chunks all with different line width.
The hair color gap above her eye does look odd I would probably make it flesh color and add the rest of the eyebrow.
As for general tips this is for the most part a good piece and really good for a first vector, things to work on are to try and get the line width a little more consistent as its a little all over the place and to not use strokes for the highlights as it looks a little out of place.
I also tend to redraw things if they look bad since I think it helps the over all images and I dislike the fingers on her, that's a more advance thing to try so if you don't want to its understandable.
Also update and I'm going to bed.
