>>1732097Still a LOT of line inconsistency, and unnecessary points.
I have circled a small smattering of consistency issues - mostly the points for lines. Since Jojo's line work works well with the "blunt" ends, (but not too blunt, mind) I have pointed out the line to use as your "standard" for the ends. If you choose not to use these, then pick one like the neck ones (the two on the same line on the guy on our right) that is circled and use that instead.
You really need to keep an ey on things like clothing and skin, since they are organic, they wont' have as many sharp corners, save for those on like finger wrinkles, and most wrinkles.
Keep at it, though, and it'll look really good.
