>>1853236Here are some last few changes.
Many areas, especially on the clothing, have very sharp areas where the lines should be smooth. Change all of those nodes to smooth instead of sharp and make sure the nodes bend enough to give the impression of a smooth curve. The same applies under her right eye. You got some color overlapping on the left colored strand, and a couple disconnected lines within the hair. Also, what this anon
>>1853322 said wouldn't be a bad idea either. It would be good practice for color correction.