>>2011598Few things I noted on attached pic. Overall it's good but I personally don't like the new colors you picked, especially the white of her eyes. I'd also make all the lines dark red, not just the hair and eyes. It looks weird with half red and black. It might look like the lines of her body are black at first glance but SHAFT makes them all dark red in Monogatari, you can still see it in the screenshot. Hope this helps.
