>>1620305I agree with a lot of what John said. Here's some of the major sticking points you should clean up and a suggestion on the hair thickness to give you some insight. I still can't fathom why someone would wear torn rags as hair accessories, but to each their own.
That being said: if it is a ribbon, it should be thicker than the hair, but thinner than the skin/clothing, at least in my experience.
