>>1775758Little late to the party but here is my 2 cents
We don't want the stuff because you ignored the points posted in the OP and the flat out stated in your original post that you were lazy with the lines and the gradients sucked.
If you think the work "sucks" and you ask how you did people are going to tell you that you should fix the issues you already know about first and then ask for advice.
But as for actual advice; if you are going for minimal lines you should have the lines make more sense, currently you have them on some fold but not others they are strokes as already mentions and I find that with minimal lines they work better as highlights and to get acrossed detail that you can not get with shapes.
Other problems you have is a lot of the hair lines are rough and in some cased don't make sense. See image.
Also as for images with minimal or no line art I have done several currently working on the Alice vector with no outlines also see:
http://fav.me/dvzum5http://fav.me/d4kyruoI guess the Shampoo one I did counts as well?
>>1775778That is cute.
