>>1479726Went ahead and worked on most of the issues you mentioned. I messed around with the stripe thickness and got it pretty close but I am not sure I am still content with the right one (her left). I gave almost all of the hair some more curve, as before I was using the square node versus the circle one (not sure the names for them). Let me know if those are for better or for worse.
I wasn't really sure what you meant with the shadow for the ribbon. I understand what you meant by making the shadow make a little more sense, but I just don't understand what you were trying to tell me to do.
As for about the hair behind her neck, I tried drawing them similar to how I drew the other hair, but it just doesn't look natural. I think the main reason is when I draw the hair with the two point system, it only looks natural because there is a beginning and an end. Those three threads of hair are more like the middle of a long strand that you can't see.
