>>1880096An image is never completed anon. It is merely abandoned.
>>1880102The curvature for a lot of your hair is lacking. Do not let the tips of the hair get fat. They need to stay thin and curve in a certain direction. Also, make sure that it smoothly goes from thick at the endpoint to thin at the sharp point. Don't allow the thickness to thin at the middle and reach a greater thickness before thinning to the sharp point (this is most evident on some of the bangs on the forehead). Any strand of hair ending outside of an object should end as a sharp node, and not circular or flat. For the hair on the right below the hat, draw it as one shape so you can get the hair to flow properly and not be disconnected. You can unite it later if you want.
You need to show better contrast between some coloring. For instance, the main skin color on the face does not contrast enough with the shadow below on the neck. Select the shadow on the neck, and go to the HSB scale. Increase Saturation and reduce Brightness to make the shadow darker and richer to contrast better. Do the same for the beige coat, so that it contrasts with the white better. For the yellow stripe, keep both sides of the sfill consistent. Make sure the nodes and handles are kept parallel on both sides to achieve this. You have some color peeking on her left arm, and you forgot to cut out a shape on her left hand. You also have some color peeking to the right of her face on the beige coat.
