>>1718943I noticed a few things. The outline for the strand of hair going over her finger looks too thin at the tip in contrast of the line of her finger passing under. Next to that there's a small gap you forgot to fill in. Lastly, the outline you did for her mouth looks too uniform and isn't natural. And about the shading on the top of her right hand, it does seem a bit too strong to me too, just like you mentioned. Rest looks fine.
