>>1650433If you are looking for improvement, I've noted a couple of issues. Red is for major thickness problems and green is because her fingers don't make sense. Her right pinky is too big compared to her left. Also, I think drawing both her ring fingers detached from the middle ones would be a huge improvement. It's just a quick inspection, there's a lot more to improve on the thickness variation for your lines but over-all it's not bad.
