>>1857280Since you've gotten closer to finishing, I'll start pointing out the issues.
Some of your hair has kinks near the tips. Try to use less nodes, or building most of the shape with just the endpoint nodes and those at the tips before adding a pair of nodes to help keep it smooth. Many of the lineart on the skin and dress should be kept as one shape instead of disconnected. The knuckles on the fingers are very sharp. Try using smooth nodes at the knuckles and bend them more to smooth it out. You have many thickness differences on the dress. Some areas are very thick in comparison to other areas. Try to match the thickness more closely, especially for the internal white part of the dress. Some of your single node tips are significantly thinner . Try to make the increase of thickness from the tips more gradual.
The highlights on the eyes should be over the lineart. You're also missing the shadows at the tops of the eyes. Also, before you start the frills, make sure you keep all nodes parallel in placement and handles. Frills are going to be a pain in the ass to get right, so it will take a lot of work to try to match thickness across all of them.
