>>2167713OR here, that's awesome work, you got the style down perfectly. The seam would be more visible if it was lower; if you could do that with it, that'd be great. I'd also like if you could try making making the panties whiter; I didn't realize how shadowed/grey they were until now.
And if you're at all up to it, I'd really appreciate if you could try making the string part visible like these, with the ties made much smaller (and the string itself thicker than the attached.)