>>2156993Yeah I misread the dimensions, sorry.
>>2157002That looks really good. The only real issue I see (aside from going back to the original color scheme) is that the transition of her lower back to her panties looks too early, it kind of makes it look like she's wearing a diaper, and it actually looked better in
>>2156911. Here's your first edit and the latest side by side for comparison, and you can also kind of see a similar issue on the lower part. Might help to also make her panties on the right side more revealing too. And like
>>2157005 said, you should extend the shadow/background behind the newly drawn fingers (and the rest of Asuka.)
Also, this is secondary, but drawing the rest of Asuka's right hand at the top made me notice how rough her ring finger and pinky look. The lack of any detail on the joint of the ring finger makes it look lumpy, and the pinky looks like a stub.
And this is purely personal, but the outline/crack on Asuka's ass could be better defined and extend further up.
