>>1751758Posting the home screen without including the phone allowed me to do some testing and tweaking which allowed me to now show you how I would change the set-up if given the chance, so thanks for that. Without further ado lets dive straight into the analysis.
First thing that came to mind was your clock. The large bright gray matched no other parts of your set-up so that immediately bothered me. After changing it to a single matching dark tone of gray I was forced to make the hours and minutes white in order to see them well, which I think turned out nicely. I also went ahead and removed the thick border and replaced it with a 2px wide replacement. The background of the clock still looked very plain so I felt the need to do something about that too, but instead of adding a subtle pattern like you did I decided to take a different approach; I added a surrounding shadow originating from the thin borders.
Next we have your icons. Although your choice of icon set was a fantastic one I was still bothered by them. After a while I drew the conclusion that it was because of two reasons.
1.) The distance between them was so large the design as a whole looked off and gave a somewhat empty impression.
2.) The fact that there were 2 'banners' that both served the same purpose, yet still were implemented in your design so differently. The one at the bottom was both size- and position wise in my eyes far more suited to be replaced with a dock or a widget.
