>>1965824The icon grid looks a little off, like they're not quite lined up. Probably just the sizes of the icons though, so maybe try rearranging them as Snapchat and music seem to extend lower than the others. If that doesn't work, increase the vertical space a little to hide it maybe?
The only other things I would change would be to get rid of the shadow round the image as the icons are totally flat, and maybe choose a slightly darker shade of grey? But those are just personal choices I guess.
>>1966007Looking good. My only suggestion would be to adjust the box so that everything is vertically centred - you have more padding on the bottom than the top at the moment.
>>1966063Nice and consistent. Maybe try doing the apps in a 2x2 grid to see how it looks? Then you'd have a column of the clock, apps and then the character. But I'm biased towards such layouts!
>>1966079That render in shape and bg are such a good pairing! The bar looks neat too, gj!
>>1966096Too cluttered and the grid spacing difference between the desktop and the dock is annoying. Remove the dock, adjust the desktop grid to suit, and you can still use half-grid spacing to have rows of 5 and 4 at the same time. If you need all those icons, consider reducing the size of the render a little.