>>1487930ok, iv'e fixed most of the problems you found, hopefully to a satisfactory level, I cant believe i missed some of them.
>>1487971Do you a curve coming in or out? I just made it going out.
>>1487991When I try to add opacity in the eye it only does the stroke, is it some other way of doing it that i'm not aware of perhaps? I'm not sure what you mean by adding blur on each eye.
>>1487996Yeah it does seem a little better now, although I think the problem is that the lightning is too smooth, should be more of an electrical effect, would that make it look any better?