>>2127114>>2128134>I'm not deadNeither am I, as it turns out. Thank you for accepting all my suggestions from last thread! The progress looks neat, but I will admit that Taeko's nose looks really off to me. Well, ultimately things like these are bound to happen because of the shit resolution of the base image, but I'll try to point out how it could be made look better with some redlines (or green, in this case) and additional references.
I think one important thing that makes the nose look so weird is that it isn't supposed to be so "rounded," and also, the lines on the left are supposed to represent the nostrils unconnected to the nose proper. All the Coppelion girls have cutesy anime noses, basically. But at the moment Taeko's looks too much like some deformed hook nose.
Compared to the previous point, this a minor complaint, but I think the mouth shouldn't be curved quite so wildly.
And finally, one more thing to note about Taeko's head: She is wearing a (short) ponytail which is tied from the rest of her hair. I see that this part looks especially murky on the base image, so it's easy to overlook if one isn't familiar with the character.
I hope this helps.
I can imagine the weapons being a drag. If you want to/have use for it, I could dig for more reference images for the weapons in question.
