>>2125695The vector looks good to me. What stands out the most to me is the way you've traced some of the features of her eyes. I'll attach an example of how I'd handle her eyes. I don't really like how her eyelashes look on that original drawing and it especially doesn't translate well with something as sharp as the pentool. Definitely a situation where I'd stray from the source. Same with the nose line, never been a fan of rounded points like the ones you've used on her nose.
