>>1874159Not him, but here are some things:
1) You got color peeking in a couple places. Make sure to place a high contrasting background behind the image when checking for errors. It will help with finding them.
2) For the white stripes on the skirt and shirt, make sure you make them smoother. Do not place any nodes except those at the endpoints, and place with the handles to get them to curve properly. Only add a pair of nodes if that fails. A good trick is to get one proper, and copy it for the other. You want those to be the same or very similar.
3) For the hair, curve the tips more. You want hair to always be curving in a certain direction, as it will give it flow and direction. You never want it to be fat or straight downwards as it makes the hair look poor.
4) You have some odd aliasing in places like at the leg or when the white stripes meet the edge. Are you exporting as Type Optimized (Hinted) (assuming you're on Illustrator). Make sure you are, and if so, make sure that if there is any coloring directly underneath another, that you hide the one underneath (ie. move the nodes under).
5) Always use IQDB when someone has posted an image For instance, the one he posted is incredibly poor quality, but if you use IQDB, you can find one that is significantly higher resolution here:
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2095107. This will make making the vector much easier.
