>>1892462>>1892582Not bad, but there are a few things to fix up.
1) You have color peeking at a few areas. One at the finger, the other between the lollipop and thumb, the black fill above the breasts, and the disconnected line below the breast. Use Smart Guides (Ctrl+U) to help clip nodes onto other nodes/fills.
2) You have color peeking behind the whites of the teeth, and along the white of the shirt. If you're using the Shape Builder tool, you have to hide the coloring underneath, otherwise, the color will peek from behind. Select the nodes of the coloring underneath and move them inwards. For nodes at the tips of the coloring, move the handles inward. This is required, due to how Type Optimized (Hinted) exports the image. Art Optimized (Supersampling) fixes that issue, but suffers from poorer aliasing, so do not use that option.
3) For the hair, get in the habit of curving the tips so they flow in a certain direction, and keep them thin as opposed to fat. For the hair on the bottom right, do not allow the handles to cross. Keep them on their respective sides. For the area underneath the ear, you neglected to draw some of the hair from the original.
4) For the breast, use a smooth node with dependent handles to make it more rounded.
Otherwise, you're good to go.
