>>1983350>>*Remove the grey lies i her hair for the dark blue color with all the blobbies in it.I agree here, the grey is because of the markers that the original artist used to make the image they are poping through and don't add much to the image. You can leave them if you want but I probably would have changed the colors of them myself.
>>* Make all the lines for her skin the skin tone line, and all the clothing the clothing tone - don't bleed them like you have it - it is just more "mess" to deal with.This is a preference thing and I am fine with the 2 colors, I would have liked you to draw the lines as one line and then use the pathfinder tool to split the line and then color them differently that way it looks like the lines were continuous rather that 2 separate lines. (Just look at the image if this does not make sense.)
>>* Make the white in her jacket pale grey - I'd also get rid of the line for the shadow separation - you don't use it anywhere else, and it looks wonky.The shadow separation thing is correct it does look a little wonky, if you are going to do it I would suggest playing with it to try to get it to follow the folds of the clothing and that may help.
>>* The eye-path thing: Waaay too busy. Try muting it down by removing some of that white.He is right in that it is really busy, I would like to see it simplified by using the ellipse tool as they look a little out of wack as well s potentially getting rid of the gradients that is not used anywhere else.
>>* I like the mouth, but I'd make the lower lip a darker shade.I really don't like the mouth at all but ymmv.
>>* Unless her hair is fucking glass, I would remove the ear lines and colors - it just looks weird like that - hair you can get away with it, as bangs are usually "thinner" and it is a cheat to show this.Ignore due to him not knowing it was transparent, Not sure what he was saying on the thinner thing.
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