>>1902434hey so just a few things. you missed her right black piece (blue circle) as well as a piece of her hair by her left eye. other cirlces are where theres some overlap issues like where her collar meets the left black strap. some of your hair tips don't flow all that well. and then just work on smoothing out your nodes. There are places on the body, I circled a few, where its to easy to see exactly where the node is, especially since they are relatively straight sections. try to go back and mess with the handles to smooth it out more.
