>>1500142Overall, not bad, but here are some suggestions to make it better:
* Green - These circles point out where your curves are too "flat" and don't have nice, natrual arcs to them. try messing with the levers very slightly.
* Red - While pointy might be in the image, it'd look better if these points were either smoothed to curves, or softened to a more natural point, instead of looking like a knot on a log.
Purple - Oddities that need some thinking. The one for the thumb, I would make a gradient that starts a lot darker near the line, moving down towards the clothing. Just make it slightly darker to emphasize it is not part of the neck...
Also, he eyes. You have one eye ending on TOP of the lower eyelid eyes, and the other on the BOTTOM. Pick one, and stick with it - it looks wonky otherwise.
Some things to make the image stand out a bit more is to change the thicknesses of certain lines. Fro example, I would be keeping the hair the thickness it is now, and the skin points would be thicker. I would then make the clothing lines even thicker, but not by too much. This will give the feel of more body to the image overall. I would also put the lines for her hair accessories into the clothing group, thickness-wise.
Hope this helps...
