Tried to be more like Graph and get scenery-esque walls. Welp.
>>1643758Different anon, the hour is slightly off-center. It's horizontally off-center, vertically it's fine. This is really cool, though, especially those colors. 9/10
>>1643761>>1643781Nice, definitely an improvement. I'd say they're just a centimeter too much to the right but that's just me nitpicking.
>>1643774Nice, it's a lot of yellow but I can't say I dislike it for that. Mecha/10
>>1643785The white in the clock is hard to see, particularly where it meets her hair. I'd get more icons, move them up, and put the clock in the bottom right. HIding the page indicators is a good idea, like the other anon said. Not bad for a first go.
