>>1861628Here's a few things after a quick look over it. Circled in red are the gradients that don't blend in very well and look a bit jarring. Yellow is for the missing gradients. I also circled a small mistake in green, you have a shape going over the cord of her sweater. All in all, you need to practice more with gradients. The lineart itself is pretty good. The color for the outline of her hair seems too bright compared to the rest, but that's more of a personal preference.