>>1761884The hairtips are exactly how they should be for any standard vector, so I do not know what you are trying to say in that regard. Line thickness is intentional. I have been on both sides of the coin, before having very thin lines (the contest one is a prime example of some of my thinnest), so I have now been actively working towards thicker lines to get experience on both sides. I don't tend to change shading from the original, so the direction of the gradients and the placement of the shadows (at least the ones I could see from the original) are there to stay.
>>1761892>>1761953Pretty much. The shading on the sweater has too much of a red tint, and the base color is too dull in comparison. I reduced the saturation and the brightness on the shadows to make it more neutral brown and increased the saturation on the sweater to complement better.
>>1761954I am not going to thicken lines anymore. I am already at my own personal breaking point to increase it anymore. I already think I went a little too far for my own personal tastes.
