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Various things I'd like someone to try doing with this, you don't have to do them all:
-Make the outlines of her panties more even and less wavy, with the right side made more revealing like the left.
-The part of her waist exposed looks too angular; try to make it look more natural.
-Give her navel more detail.
-It's kind of the style, but her face's proportions look a bit off. It seems like either her chin is too big or her mouth is too high or both.
-Have a seam going across her crotch and her crotch made more narrow.
-Have her hip bones showing.
-Have some of her ass showing between her legs.
-Try to give her panties more detail in general, but where it largely fits with the style of the rest of the screencap, like the animators decided to give a bit more emphasis to them compared to the rest of the image. In particular, try to give some contours to them, they just look completely flat.
