>>1606593Line consistency - The blues point to how inconsistent the hair, is, with he exception of the one circle all the others point to, which has the most consistency, without being uniform. I was going to circle almost all the hair, but there are some nuggets of niceness that would get lost in the circling.
You have a few lines in the clothing that are off, too. Again, just go through and check your lines.
The one red circle is something that's just bugging me, and I don't know why - maybe because none of the other similar points of her hair have this? <shrugs>
But my personal beef is that it's SEPIA. You really cannot do much with it like this, and SEPIA is overrated. IF possible, would you make a version that uses nice coloration and tones, as if she were out in daytime, noon sunlight?
Other than the consistency issue in the hair, the majority of it is promising - I just really, REALLY don't like sepia, and have to keep from using the "auto correct colors" on my image viewer on something it cannot correspond to...
