Fixed a few things. Comments, questions, concerns?
>>1743622Okay I did all of that, but as for the clock - the whole thing looked really flat without a shadow, so I just lightened it a bit. Does it look good? Should I just use a different clock?
And that white bar on her head was actually the song progress bar. I got rid of the google search bar, moved it down to the bottom, and made it a bit thicker.
Thanks for the advice + compliment!
>>1743632watamote/10
I like it. It's a bit busy - but it's cohesive so that's fine! A bit of advice. Make your music widget transparent. It's weird to have all widgets be transparent and then have one really dark one. Can you make the bottom nav bar transparent? If so do that too.
>>1743640Much better. Move the whole thing up just a little bit, since you have more space at the top now. Other than that, you're looking good!
>>1743698I get that your status bar has a clock, but you need something up top because it's really empty. So hide your status bar and add a clock (with or without banner, it's up too you, but if you don't use a banner move Maki down a bit so it doesn't overlap her antler.)
Like the other anons said, make your bottom banner wider, so the icons don't touch the edges, and take some colors from either the flowers or the background and use that for the banner.
>>1743752I actually have that pic saved on my computer! I might use it someday. It sure would be easier to explain to someone in my phone than a loli in a skimpy bikini...
>>1743866Very empty. Move all that stuff down and space it out, so that you don't have a big gaping hole on the left.
