>>1458807See, the green is what I would normally do. The issue was that the source image doesn't show each hair strand as pointy. The ends for the most part are pointy, but the beginnings have that blockish texture. I can still see a couple spots where I can improve, but for the most part, I would prefer to stick with how it looks in the source image. The other issue was it got a little hard to tell just how some of the strands were drawn due to the quality of the image.
Here is the source image for reference.