>>1887768Heh whoops, I was eager to post so I may have typed a little too quicky. Thanks for the reply I thickened the jacket lines a little and fixed a few other things, I also finished the colouring. I tried to keep the thickness variations subtle as I was worried about making the same mistake I did in the first tsukihi post, but the variations are there. Judging line art thickness is something i need to get better at, hopefully I'll improve over time.
If anyone can see any mistakes or things that look out of place, please let me know and I'll try my best to fix them.
