>>1480848Here are the things I noticed. I agree with the above lazy eye comment, so I didn't add it on the image.
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* Pink is off inconsistency in the glasses First they are ovals, and not sharp, so smooth them. Also, the right-hand side glass doesnt' seem to conform to the frame properly. Check the whole frame setting to the glass to be on the safe side.
* Red - places where things need to join better. I know there might be a thin separation between the hair and ear that I pointed out, but either move the lines to join, or separate them to have a tiny bit more space - this way just looks off.
* Orange: odd terminations and all are inconsistent. If you're going to terminate ends softly for the shirt, I recommend the one outlined in orange AND green. The one on the sleeve should just be a smooth transition into that wrinkle, and the thumb should also be a smooth line.
And as always: double-check your line consistencies between types of material. you're all over the place with thicknesses...
* Gray - the black looks off. Maybe a dark gray or darker green to emphasize the shadow?
* Red and gray is actually a Purple, and Purple shows an inconsistency in thickness. Make the line more like the grey/Red line.
* Light green is a line thta neds to merge in better. at this resolution, it looks a bit like a bump instead of a smooth transition.
* Dark green is just an odd termination Maybe make this also like the orange/green?
