>>1447246better, though i would do the eyes like this, and heres some color ides for the hair i guess. the highlight is still a bit too skin tone i think, you could probably get away with just a white honestly.
also, you could even possibly add some blur to the eyes if you did it this way. i always do layers in order of outline, highlight, midtone, and shadow. sorry im OCD with eyes i guess.
